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Month: March 2022

Status Report (29 March 2022)

Status Report (29 March 2022)

Well, I was beginning to think March would be another month of not reaching my main goals, but the last few days have been more productive than I might have expected.

My primary project this month was to produce the initial partial draft of the “special and unusual cases” section for Architect of Worlds. At the moment, that section isn’t complete, and it probably won’t be complete before the end of the month. On the other hand, I expect it will have about 8000-9000 words of new material, which is right on the threshold of what I would consider worth sending to my patrons as a charged release.

I’m therefore about 90% certain that there will be a charged release for this month, probably appearing on 31 March, consisting of the first interim partial draft of this section of Architect. As with the other sections that I’ve been working on, especially the main design sequence, this is the only draft for which my patrons will be charged. Later additions and updates to that section will be free releases.

I should point out that this is very nearly the last section that needs to be written for Architect of Worlds. There’s still one section outstanding – the one describing how to design maps of interstellar space for a science-fiction setting – but I’m anticipating that section may be fairly short on word count. I may take a crack at that section next month . . . depending, of course, on what else might present itself as ready to spring from my brow, fully armed and with a mighty shout.

What’s really encouraging is that if that last section does get down on paper, virtually speaking, it means the book will actually be finished, at least in a rough draft. The very next step I would take at that point is to integrate all of the sections into a single coherent draft, after which my patrons and readers would be getting updates to the whole book at once. I anticipate a few months of further editing and polishing before the text gets finalized, and I move to actual layout and production.

There seems to be a reasonable chance that Architect of Worlds will actually be published before the end of calendar year 2022. After which I suspect I will be heaving an enormous sigh of relief.

Review: The Raven and the Dove, by K. M. Butler

Review: The Raven and the Dove, by K. M. Butler

The Raven and the Dove by K. M. Butler

Overall Rating: ***** (5 stars)

The Raven and the Dove is a historical romance, telling the story of an unlikely couple amid turbulent times in the early medieval period. The story covers a little less than two years in the late ninth century, in the northern lands of the Frankish empire, a region that will one day be called Normandy.

At the beginning of the story, the Norse chieftain Rollo has established himself as the jarl of Rouen, wealthy from years of raiding deep into Frankish territory. Rollo’s raids, and those of his fellow Norsemen, have driven many of the region’s Frankish nobles into exile. Rollo sees the resulting power vacuum as an opportunity, which might enable him to create a new kingdom of his own. For now, he is still working to establish and defend his power.

One of Rollo’s officers is a shield-maiden named Halla: a fiercely independent woman, who lives by the Norse code of courage and honor. When we first meet her, she has just taken part in a raid, and fights to defend her people against a Frankish counterattack. Rollo soon sets Halla to lead an expedition toward the Frankish town of Lillebonne, which he hopes to integrate into his growing demesne.

When she reaches her destination, Halla meets Taurin, a Frankish landowner who is one of the leaders of the community. Lillebonne has been abandoned by the Frankish nobility, and Taurin fears that the town is doomed if it doesn’t make an agreement with Rollo and his Norsemen. He therefore accepts an invitation to return to Rouen with Halla, to meet Rollo and negotiate for the town’s fate. When Halla is made a chieftain in her own right, and the jarl’s representative in Lillebonne, she makes the fateful decision to marry Taurin and work with him to govern the town.

Halla and Taurin marry for pragmatic reasons rather than for love. Although they have a frank and vigorous sexual relationship, it takes a lot of time and work for them to become true partners. The obstacles in their path are considerable. Halla is a pagan, a warrior whose fortune was built on raiding and violence. Taurin is a Christian who inherited his wealth and station, a man of peace. Halla takes a pragmatic view of the world, whereas Taurin is an idealist. Norse and Frankish customs are starkly different; the two peoples regard each other as heathens and barbarians, and there is little love or trust between them. Halla and Taurin have a difficult time learning to understand one another. Yet somehow, despite external threats and the constant risk of violent rebellion, they need to find a way for two peoples to live together.

If you know the history of this period, you know the result is a foregone conclusion. In the following generations, the blended folk of Normandy will become one of the most dynamic and powerful peoples of medieval Europe. Yet here we’re seeing the very beginning of that process, at a time when Halla and Taurin could not count on success. The two of them will have to think fast, take risks, and learn to trust each other despite all the obstacles they face. The story that follows is a deeply engrossing visit to a historical period few modern readers will find familiar.

K. M. Butler has a very clean prose style, and the editing here is superb; I noticed one or two copy- or line-editing problems, but they never posed any risk of fatally distracting me. The story alternates between two viewpoint characters, but each section is labeled, and viewpoint discipline is otherwise strict. The story sometimes risks falling too deep into expository passages, but these are usually placed in the voice of one of the viewpoint characters, avoiding pulling the reader out of the story. In all, a very workmanlike novel.

The historical elements of the story are well researched. Early medieval and Norse history are not my specialties, but I found the setting and the behavior of characters quite plausible. The only quibble I had was the prominent role of “shield-maidens” in the Norse forces. The archeological evidence for Norse women warriors is patchy at best. Still, shield-maidens are prominent in the Norse sagas, and they have captured the modern imagination in creations like the Vikings TV show. It’s a perfectly viable move to center this story around one of them, especially if the objective is to tell the tale of the foundation of Normandy through a love story. In the end, I had no quarrel with the result!

I thoroughly enjoyed The Raven and the Dove, and it left me wanting more. Very highly recommended if you enjoy well-done historical fiction with a strong dash of earthy romance.

Architect of Worlds: the “Special Cases” Outline

Architect of Worlds: the “Special Cases” Outline

A quick taste for what I’ll be working on this month. This is a section of the eventual book that will cover “special cases” in the design process, things that stand as exceptions or as extra details outside the main body of the world design sequence.

Hopefully this will end up being enough material (10-15 thousand words or more) to justify a new release for my patrons this month. Actually, now would also be a good time for any of my readers to suggest anything else that might fit into this section. Drop me a line if there’s some special topic that you want to see addressed that isn’t in this sketch outline.

Special Cases in Worldbuilding

  • Generating Stars in Unusual Regions
    • OB Associations
    • Open Clusters and Stellar Associations
    • Inter-Arm Space
    • Galactic Halo
  • Unusual Stars
    • Massive Main-Sequence Stars
    • Neutron Stars
    • Black Holes
    • Flare Stars
  • Planetary Systems for Non-Main Sequence Stars
    • Brown Dwarfs
    • Subgiant and Giant Stars
    • White Dwarfs and Stellar Remnants
  • Planetary Systems for Multiple Stars
  • Special Features for Planetary Systems
    • Asteroids and Comets
    • Planetoid Belts
    • Kuiper Belt
    • Oort Cloud
    • Rogue Planets
    • Trojan Planets
  • Unusual Worlds
    • Ammonia Worlds
    • Carbon Worlds
    • Chthonian Worlds
    • Lava Worlds
  • Fine-Tuning World Climate
    • Effects of Orbital Eccentricity
    • Effects of Obliquity
    • Effects of Daily Rotation
    • Effects of Altitude
    • Effects of Local Geography
    • Tide-Locked Worlds

Planning for March 2022

Planning for March 2022

Well, February was at least somewhat successful – I managed a major rewrite of sections of the Architect of Worlds design sequence, and released a new interim draft of that for a wide audience. I think in March I’m going to try to keep up my momentum there, and work on some new sections of the book. It would be nice if I could have the whole rough draft finished before summer, so I could work on final polish and layout and actually get the book out at last.

There’s one new development in how I’m planning to structure these projects. I’m going to break the Human Destiny setting bible into two distinct books for eventual publication under the Cepheus Engine game rules. The core setting bible itself will get the working title of the Human Destiny Player’s Guide, and then there’s going to be a separate Atlas of the Human Protectorate that provides location data and adventure seeds. My patrons will get free updates to the Player’s Guide, since I’ve already charged them for that once, but the Atlas will likely be a charged release once there’s enough material there to justify one.

Meanwhile, I really need to get unblocked on Krava’s Legend again if I can. it’s been well over a year since The Curse of Steel was published, and it needs to start getting sequels if the series is ever going to attract an audience.

Here’s the list for March:

  • Top Priority (“this is how I’ll judge whether the month has been successful”)
    • Architect of Worlds: Start work on a section describing the structure of the galaxy and of interstellar space, and providing guidelines on how to make maps for interstellar settings.
    • Architect of Worlds: Start work on a section of special cases and additional worldbuilding material that doesn’t fit into the design sequence.
    • Human Destiny: Start compiling material for the eventual Atlas of the Human Protectorate, meanwhile giving the Architect of Worlds material a good workout.
    • Krava’s Legend: Review and possibly rewrite the existing partial draft of The Sunlit Lands, and write a few new chapters.
  • Second Priority (“work on this as time permits”):
    • Human Destiny: Design additional new rules systems for the Player’s Guide and add these to the interim draft.
    • Krava’s Legend: Write the second short story for the “reader magnet” collection.
  • Back Burner (“work on this only if everything else gets blocked”):
    • Human Destiny: Finish the novelette “Remnants” for eventual collection and publication.
    • Scorpius Reach: Write a few new chapters of Second Dawn.
    • Scorpius Reach: Start work on a third edition of the Game of Empire rules for Traveller (or Cepheus Engine)

I think the top priority for a charged release will be to get the initial draft of the “special cases and additional worldbuilding topics” material finished. The other items are more likely to give rise to free updates for my patrons.